Task 8: Rough mock up/Plan of digipak cover

Task 7: Feedback on rough cut of our music video

We presented our rough cut of our music video to our class and recieved some positive feedback and some constructive criticism which was very useful as it will help us make any changes that the audience will want to see change:

Some of the comments were:

- More interaction between the couple would be better
- Pictures all over the screen would be a good idea
- Clips need to be shorter
- Images are on for too long - can put more or speed up the duration of each
- Lip synching/talking is not clear - needs to be cut into
- Artist looks confused in the mirror scene - needs fixing,

Task 8: Feedback on digipak pitch/Print products

We have pitched our initial ideas for our print products and have gained some useful audience comment on what they liked and some suggestions before we get on with them:

- Idea of female being the shadow is good
- Shadow of the female shouldn't be there as it will take the focus away from him as an artist
- The park may be a good location from the music video to use for the insert
- A use of the artist's image from the music video in the park with a different background that can be created on photoshop may be a good idea.

We have taken some comments into consideration and will have only the artist featured on all of the print products.

Task 8: Research and Planning: Case studies for print products

Task 7: Miss You So by Frank Ocean (Final Version)

Task 7: Miss You So by Frank Ocean (First Draft)

Task 7: Editing work in progress

We are working our way through editing the clips and to put them together for our music video. We are becoming confident in using Final Cut Pro independently as a group